We started class revising a sentence the sentence was:
A girl walked thru the hall scared.
As always we were in a hurry we went right into our daily grammar practice. For todays practice we had to make the revising marks upon or sentence.Then Mrs. Morrow surprised us with a new way of checking our ghost stories. The whole class got a revising and editing paper.
We revised and edited our own righting as the computer read aloud our stories. We had to make to make sure that we made sure our stores had:
- At least the paragraphs describing our ghosts
- We had to replace dull words with exciting words or we had to insert them
- Double spacing